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Background
Dylan
Thomas (1914-1953) was born in Swansea, Wales. There, he attended a school
where his father taught English. Although he was a mediocre
student, he became interested in writing and served on the staff of a school
publication. At 17, he accepted a job on a local newspaper and in 1934
moved to London, where he published his first collection of poems. In 1951,
he wrote “Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night, ” one of his most popular
poems. He addressed it to his octogenarian father, whose eyesight and general
health were failing. The poem urges his father to fight against death--to
"burn and rave at close of day"--rather than surrendering meekly to it.
The poet himself certainly burned with zest for life. Unfortunately, he
indulged in it recklessly, drinking heavily, and died a year after the
poem was published, in 1952.
Point
of View
Stanzas
1 and 6, which the poet addressed directly to his father, are in second-person
point of view (you understood). The other stanzas are in third-person
point of view.
Type
of Work, Stucture, and Rhyme Scheme
“Do
Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night” is a villanelle, a form of poetry popularized
mainly in France in the 16th Century. It usually expressed pastoral, idyllic
sentiments in imitation of the Italian villanella, a type of song for singers
and dancers that centered on rural, peasant themes. When French writers
such as Joachim du Bellay (1522-1560) and Philipe Desportes (1546-1606)
began writing villanelles, these poems did not have a fixed format. However,
when Jean Passerat (1534-1602) wrote a villanelle whose format caught the
fancy of critics, that format became the standard for all future villanelles.
The format is as follows:
Number
of Stanzas: six
Lines
in Each Stanza: three in each of the first five stanzas, four in the
last. A three-line stanza is called a tercet; a four-line stanza, a quatrain.
Refrains:
two lines, the first and third of the first stanza, must be repeated in
the other stanzas. Here is the pattern: Line 1 of the first stanza is repeated
as Line 3 of the second stanza, as Line 3 of the fourth stanza, and as
Line 3 of the sixth stanza. Line 3 of the first stanza is repeated as Line
3 of the third stanza, Line 3 of the fifth stanza, and Line 4 of the sixth
stanza.
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Rhyme: aba
in the first five stanzas; abaa
in the last stanza. Following are the rhyming words in Thomas’s poem:
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Stanza 1 |
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night |
day |
light |
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Stanza 2 |
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right |
they |
night |
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Stanza 3 |
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bay |
light |
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Stanza 4 |
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flight |
way |
night |
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Stanza 5 |
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sight |
gay |
light |
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Stanza 6 |
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height |
pray |
night |
light
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Meter
Except for the second one
of Stanza 5, each line in the poem has ten syllables (five feet). The first
syllable in a line is unstressed, the second is stressed, the third is
unstressed, the fourth is stressed, and so on. Thus, the poem is in iambic
pentameter. (If you need a detailed explanation of iambic pentameter and
other metric formats, click here.)
The following example demonstrates
the metric scheme of the first two lines. The unstressed syllables are
in blue; the stressed are in red capitals. Over each pair of syllables
is a number representing the foot. Also, a black vertical line separates
the feet.
......1.............2..........3............4................5
Do
NOT |
go
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tle
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to
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good
NIGHT...........(Iambic
Tetrameter)
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should
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RAVE |
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of
DAY.....................(Iambic
Trimeter)
Theme
Dylan
Thomas is saying in his own way what one of Shakespeare's characters says
in Henry VI Part I :
"Fight till the last gasp" (Act I, Scene II, Line 127). Even at the end
of life, the poem advises, one should attempt to "burn" with life, to "rage
against the dying of the light."
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Figures of Speech
Thomas uses a variety of
figures of speech. Examples are the following:
Alliteration: go,
good (Stanza 1); though, their (Stanza 2); deeds, danced
(Stanza 3) sang, sun (Stanza 4); learn, late (Stanza 4);
see, sight (Stanza 5); blinding, blind, blaze (Stanza 5).
Note: Go and gentle do not alliterate; they have different
consonant sounds.
Assonance: age,
rave, day (Stanza 1); blaze, gay, rage (Stanza 5)
Metaphor: good
night compared to death (Stanza 1)
Metaphor: Wild
men who caught and sang the sun in flight (Stanza 4). Implied comparison
of achievement to catching the fire of the sun and to singing triumphantly
Two Metaphors: words
had forked no lightning (Stanza 2). (1) Words are compared to the cause
of forked lightning. (See Notes and Comments for Stanza
2 for an explanation of the scientific term forked lightning.) (2)
Lightning is compared to attention, notice--that is, the words had received
no attention.
Metaphor/Personification/Metonymy:
old age . . . burn . . . rave. (Old age represents and is compared to a
person)
Metaphor/Personification:
frail deeds might have danced
Oxymoron: good
night (Stanza 1). Good death is oxymoronic if one does not view
death as good.
Oxymoron: blinding
sight (Stanza 5)
Oxymoron: fierce
tears (Stanza 6)
Simile: blind
eyes could blaze like meteors (Stanza 5)
Do
Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night
By Dylan Thomas
| Text of the Poem |
Notes and Comments |
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Do
not go gentle into that good night,
Old
age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage,
rage against the dying of the light. |
Point
of View: Thomas begins the poem with second-person point of view, telling
his father and other readers to "fight till the last gasp," as Shakespeare
said.
go gentle: Go
becomes a copulative verb, permitting the use of the adjective gentle
rather than the adverb gently.
close of day: end
of life
good night: two meanings:
(1) death, (2) goodbye
light: will to live;
spirit, soul, mind; hope |
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Though wise men at their
end know dark is right,
Because their words had
forked no lightning they
Do
not go gentle into that good night. |
Point
of View: Thomas shifts to third-person point of view. Here he is making
a declarative statement when he says wise men "do not go gentle."
Sentence Structure:
Whereas the first stanza contains three main clauses, the second stanza
contains two subordinate clauses, beginning with though and because,
and a main clause, beginning with they.
right: inevitable,
unavoidable; natural
forked no lightning:
failed to command attention; failed to express a startling or revolutionary
concept. In meteorology, "forked lightning" describes a lightning strike
that divides into two or more branches resembling the roots of a plant--or,
metaphorically, a fork. A common cause of the phenomenon is a second bolt
that follows the path of the first bolt, then diverts away from it. Forked
lightning is a spectacular sight; thus, words that "fork lighting" would
be likewise spectacular. The poet Gerard Manley Hopkins (1844-1889) used
the phrase "forked lightning" in a poem entitled "The Shepherd's Brow."
Click
here for pictures of forked lightning.
they
do: example of enjambment |
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Good men, the last wave by,
crying how bright
Their
frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying
of the light. |
Point
of View: Thomas continues third-person point of view.
Sentence Structure:
The stanza is a single declarative sentence.
Parallel Ideas: Good
men has the force of wise men in the previous stanza. The message
expressed in both stanzas is similar: Men facing death realize they could
have done more and thus fight against the dying of the light.
crying: weeping or
shouting
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their: another instance of enjambment |
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Wild men who caught and
sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they
grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that
good night. |
Point
of View: Thomas continues third-person point of view.
Sentence Structure:
The stanza is a single declarative sentence.
Parallel Ideas: Wild
men has the force of good men in Stanza 3 and wise men
in Stanza 2. The message is the same as in Stanzas 2 and 3.
Wild . . . flight:
These men had their moment in the sun, so to speak. But
they lived most of their lives in shadows, grieving over daily travails.
they grieved it:
dismissed it; sent it. They did not seize the moment and capture what it
offered them. |
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Grave men, near death,
who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze
like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying
of the light. |
Point
of View: Thomas continues third-person point of view.
Sentence Structure:
The stanza is a single declarative sentence. Note that the word that
is understood between the words sight and blind.
Parallel Ideas: Grave
men has the force of wild men in Stanza 4, good men in
Stanza 3 and wise men in Stanza 2. The message is the same as in
Stanzas 2 and 3.
Grave men: Serious
men. It seems that Thomas veers close to bathos
here, for the words can be read as a prosaic
pun.
blinding sight: an
oxymoron to convey the idea that dying men with failing eyes see with illuminating
insight
blaze . . . gay:
A blind man can see in other ways and even "blaze" with ideas and zest
for life |
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And you, my father, there
on the sad height,
Curse, bless me now
with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that
good night.
Rage, rage against the dying
of the light. |
curse,
bless: In effect, "if you cursed me, you would be blessing me." Cursing
his son would show that he still has fire, spirit, the will to fight. |
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Poems of Dylan Thomas, Copyright
© 1952, 1953 by Dylan Thomas. Copyright © 1937, 1945, 1955, 1962,
1966, 1967 by the Trustees for the Copyrights of Dylan Thomas. Copyright
© 1938, 1939, 1943, 1946, 1971 New Directions Publishing Corp.
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Study
Questions and Writing Topics
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Dylan Thomas advises his readers
to "rage against the dying of the light." If he were alive today, what
would he say about assisted suicide and euthanasia?
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Thomas, though a popular poet
in his lifetime, managed money ineptly and thus was always in financial
trouble. Moreover, he drank to excess. Research his life, then answer this
question: Do you believe his drinking was a misguided attempt to "rage
against the dying of the light"? Or was it a sign that he had despaired
and decided to "go gentle," under the influence of alcohol, "to that good
night"? (Thomas died in New York City after drinking to excess.)
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Have you ever "forked lightning"?
(See Notes and Comments, above.) If so, write an essay about your experience.
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In 1854, Henry David Thoreau
wrote that "the mass of men lead lives of quiet desperation." Was Dylan
Thomas writing about the same men as Thoreau when he wrote in Stanzas 2
to 5 that certain men "do not go gentle" because they had "forked no lightning"
or because they "grieved" the sun on its way?
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Write a villanelle that imitates
the Thomas poem. Focus on a theme of your choice.
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