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Type of
Work
.......“Because
I Could Not Stop for Death” is a lyric
poem on the theme of death. The contains six stanzas, each with four lines.
A four-line stanza is called a quatrain. The poem was first published in
1890 in Poems, Series 1, a collection of Miss Dickinson's poems
that was edited by two of her friends, Mabel Loomis Todd and Thomas Wentworth
Higginson. The editors titled the poem "Chariot."
Commentary
and Theme
.......“Because
I Could Not Stop for Death” reveals Emily Dickinson’s calm acceptance of
death. It is surprising that she presents the experience as being no more
frightening than receiving a gentleman caller—in
this case, her fiancé (Death personified).
.......The
journey to the grave begins in Stanza 1, when Death comes calling in a
carriage in which Immortality is also a passenger. As the trip continues
in Stanza 2, the carriage
trundles along at an easy, unhurried pace, perhaps suggesting that death
has arrived in the form of a disease or debility that takes its time to
kill. Then, in Stanza 3, the author appears to review the stages of her
life: childhood (the recess scene), maturity (the ripe, hence, “gazing”
grain), and the descent into death (the setting sun)–as she passes to the
other side. There, she experiences a chill because she is not warmly dressed.
In fact, her garments are more appropriate for a wedding, representing
a new beginning, than for a funeral, representing an end.
.......Her
description of the grave as her “house” indicates how comfortable she feels
about death. There, after centuries pass, so pleasant is her new life that
time seems to stand still, feeling “shorter than a Day.”
.......The
overall theme of the poem seems to be that death is not to be feared since
it is a natural part of the endless cycle of nature. Her view of death
may also reflect her personality and religious beliefs. On the one hand,
as a spinster, she was somewhat reclusive and introspective, tending to
dwell on loneliness and death. On the other hand, as a Christian and a
Bible reader, she was optimistic about her ultimate fate and appeared to
see death as a friend.
Characters
Speaker: A woman who
speaks from the grave. She says she calmly accepted death. In fact, she
seemed to welcome death as a suitor whom she planned to "marry."
Death: Suitor who
called for the narrator to escort her to eternity.
Immortality: A passenger
in the carriage.
Children: Boys and
girls at play in a schoolyard. They symbolize early life.
Text
and Notes
Because I could not stop
for Death,
He kindly stopped for me;
The carriage held but just
ourselves
And Immortality.
We slowly drove, he knew
no haste,
And I had put away
My labor, and my leisure
too,
For his civility.
We passed the school, where
children strove
At recess, in the ring;
We passed the fields of
gazing grain,
We passed the setting sun.
Or rather, he passed us;
The dews grew quivering
and chill,
For only gossamer my gown,1
My tippet2
only tulle.3
We paused before a house4
that seemed
A swelling of the ground;
The roof was scarcely visible,
The cornice5
but a mound.
Since then
'tis centuries,6
and yet each
Feels shorter than the day
I first surmised the horses'
heads
Were toward eternity.
Notes
1...gossamer
my gown: Thin wedding dress for the speaker's marriage to Death.
2...tippet:
Scarf for neck or shoulders.
3...tulle:
Netting.
4...house:
Speaker's tomb.
5...cornice:
Horizontal molding along the top of a wall.
6...Since
. . . centuries: The length of time she has been in the tomb.
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Meter
.......In
each stanza, the first line has eight syllables (four feet); the second,
six syllables (three feet); the third, eight syllables (four feet); and
the fourth, six syllables (three feet). The meter alternates between iambic
tetrameter (lines with eight syllables, or four feet) and iambic trimeter
(lines with six syllables, or three feet). In iambic meter, the feet (pairs
of syllables) contain an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable.
(For detailed information on meter, click
here.) The following example demonstrates the metric scheme.
.......1..................2...............3....................4
Be CAUSE..|..I
COULD..|..not
STOP..|..for
DEATH,
......1..................2.................3
He KIND..|..ly
STOPPED..|..for
ME;
........1.................2.................3...................4
The CARR..|..iage
HELD..|..but
JUST..|..our
SELVES
....1..............2............3
And IM..|..mor
TAL..|..i
TY.
End
Rhyme
.......The
second and fourth lines of stanzas 1, 2, 4, 5, and 6 rhyme. However, some
of the lines contain only close rhymes or eye rhymes. In the third stanza,
there is no end rhyme, but ring (line 2) rhymes with the penultimate words
in lines 3 and 4.
Internal
Rhyme
.......Dickinson
also occasionally uses internal rhyme, as in the following lines:
The carriage held
but just ourselves (line 3)
We slowly
drove, he knew no
haste (line 5)
We passed the fields of
gazing grain
(line 11)
The dews grew quivering
and chill (line 14)
Symbols
.......In
the fourth stanza, the school symbolizes the morning of life; the grain,
the midday of life and the working years; the setting sun, the evening
of life and the death of life.
Figures
of Speech
.......Following
are examples of figures of speech in the poem. (For definitions of figures
of speech, click here.)
Alliteration
Because
I could not stop for Death (line 1)
he knew
no haste (line 5)
My
labor, and my
leisure too (line 7)
At recess,
in the ring
gazing
grain (line 11)
setting
sun (line 12)
For only gossamer
my gown (line 15)
My tippet
only tulle (line 16)
toward
eternity
(line 24)
Anaphora
We
passed the school, where
children strove
At recess, in the ring;
We
passed the fields of gazing
grain,
We
passed the setting sun.
(lines 9-12)
Paradox
Since
then 'tis centuries, and yet each
Feels
shorter than the day
I
first surmised the horses'
heads (lines 21-23)
Personification
We passed the setting
sun.
Or rather, he passed us
(lines 12-13)
Comparison of the sun
to a person
Death is personified throughout
the poem
Critic's
View: One of the Great Poems in English
.......Allen
Tate (1899-1979)—a distinguished American
poet, teacher, and critic—observed that "Because
I Could Not Stop for Death" is an extraordinary poem. In fact, he said,
it deserves to be regarded as "one of the greatest in the English language;
it is flawless to the last detail.—Quoted
in Brown, Clarence A., and John T. Flanagan, eds. American Literature:
a College Survey. New York: McGraw-Hill, 1961, page 436.
Study
Questions and Writing Topics
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Write an essay explaining Emily
Dickinson's views on the afterlife.
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Write a short poem on the theme
of death.
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In what ways does Emily Dickinson's
views of death differ from those of Edgar
Allan Poe?
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Is the poem uplifting? Or do
you find it morbid? Explain your answer.
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